I think my second issue was much better than the first. I did some things a lot better as far as images went but some things could have been improved. This was the first time I ever had a writer. Thanks Ed! I also made a huge mistake which has been a constant reminder to me on the importance of taking my time with the editing process. Unfortunately I was unable to make a follow up issue to this for a while.

And the cheap 360? It took some work and some time but I got it.